What if One Night Could Change Your Life?
Working in a diner by day and desperately applying for accounting jobs by night, Allie Nobokov fears that her future will be one of a single, virginal, cat lady. A chance encounter with a gorgeous stranger, Zac, awakens her desires and she feels an undeniable connection.
When fate pushes them together once again, Allie’s desires run wild – until, just when things start getting hot and heavy, Zac disappears into the night...
How can you deny a connection so strong?
All that is pushed to the back of Allie’s mind when her younger brother shows up on her doorstep, desperately in need of more money than she can provide… Until she sees a classified ad.
“I met a girl and I can’t get over her,” says the ad, and goes on to describe Allie. “If you look like her, I’ll pay handsomely for one night with you.”
Can Allie summon the courage to answer the mysterious ad and go through with what it entails? And can she convince the enigmatic Zac to push aside his demons and give their love a chance?
A Sexy, New Adult Story
Undeniable was a very short novella that ends in quite a big cliffy! I did enjoy the story but I can't say that I wasn't disappointed that there wasn't more to it...but I do look forward to reading much more of this story. I normally don't read really short stories because most do end up in cliff hangers but this story is worth it and it will capture you straight from the beginning all the way to the end. I would give it a 3.5-4 stars! It was told in Allie's POV. This review will be short and sweet because I don't want to give to much away given its so short so bare with me diva fans I will give you as much as I can!
What if one Night Could Change your life?
Allie is shy girl who gets the attention of a mysterious man in the diner she works at, she feels and instant connection but isn't sure why. She doesn't see this sexy man again and wonders if he felt what she did, but she knows that she will never be able to find out unless he returns to the diner. Her mother and father had passed away and all she had left was her brother Joel who she hardly saw. One night he shows up and ask her for help with a debt he has to pay off and Allie has no idea how she is going to help him he says its a life or death situation, and she would do anything for him. She gets on her computer to search for more jobs and stumbles upon an ad for an escort position and the man asking for it gives a description of a waitress that he met and can't get out of his mind...could it be the sexy man from the diner??? What would he pay her to be his escort? Could she be an escort when she had little to no experience in the sexual department?? One night that is all he is asking for and she wanted him so badly when she first seen him so she had to find out if this was the same man.... What will happen when it is Zac and he propositions her will she accept this to help her brother because Zac is willing to pay the amount she is asking for? Will she ever see him again after..she knows in heart she won't because he told her upfront one night...will it change her life?
Allie- We shared another smile, and sudden charge of electricity rushed through my body. My nipples hardened underneath my lacy bra, and I felt a rush creeping up my neck. The stranger's eyes were shimmering under the harsh diner lights, and the smile was a bit too sexy for the anticipation of a glass of water. He hadn't just read my mind, had he? I walked away from him, toward the table I was serving. It was like leaving a magnetic force field, but I managed it, even though every fiber of my being wanted to go back to his table and ask him if he'd like to leave this crappy diner and run away together.
Allie and Zac- "No more questions."
I felt his hand on the back of my neck, and then his lips brushed mine. The jolt of electricity hit me suddenly, making me gasp and draw back. I stared up into his eyes. They were dark, darker than I'd ever seen them, and I saw the barely contained desire that lurked there. He grazed my lips again, his lips barely brushing against my lower lip. I moaned, suddenly wanting more.
As if he'd read my mind, Zac scooped one arm under my knees, and lifted me up onto his lap.
"Mine" he growled softly and this lips brushed against mine again.
He traced his lips gently.
"You want me," Zac said. It was a statement, not a question, and I nodded.
